I was told I need to talk louder and stay still when I speak. I tried my best in the elevator pitch. Although, I did not receive much feedback on the last one so I did not change a lot.
Hey Jaclyn! I enjoyed watching your video! I think you did a great job of speaking loud and clear. I went back and watched your first pitch, and I believe even though you didn’t change much, your message was cleaner and overall better. I think you did a great job at self reflecting in order to make this adjustment! Great job
Jaclyn, Good job on your pitch! You gave a clear overview of what you want to do which is very hard to achieve. I also have the problem of speaking up in these videos so I can definitely relate. You definitely improved and this pitch is better than the last although you didn't really changer need to change much. Overall very good job and keep up the good work!
Hey Jaclyn! I enjoyed watching your video! I think you did a great job of speaking loud and clear. I went back and watched your first pitch, and I believe even though you didn’t change much, your message was cleaner and overall better. I think you did a great job at self reflecting in order to make this adjustment! Great job
ReplyDeleteJaclyn,
ReplyDeleteGood job on your pitch! You gave a clear overview of what you want to do which is very hard to achieve. I also have the problem of speaking up in these videos so I can definitely relate. You definitely improved and this pitch is better than the last although you didn't really changer need to change much. Overall very good job and keep up the good work!